23rd Jul 2014, 12:27 PM in Erin's Movie

1240. Erin's Movie 03: Screenplay Notes

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1240. Erin's Movie 03: Screenplay Notes
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Dyonus 23rd Jul 2014, 12:27 PM edit delete
Dyonus
I wish I could read as fast as Erin. I kinda over-exaggerated here. A two-hour screen play should take longer than 15 minutes (minus about 5 for getting lost), even for a speed-reader...I would think. I've read a couple of plays, but not really any screenplays.

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Andore Mordre 24th Jul 2014, 11:17 PM edit delete reply
Andore Mordre
It's Erin's superpower.
Casanova 25th Jul 2014, 10:05 PM edit delete reply
Awwww, Matt didn't squawk :P

The beard is still kinda confusing in the last panel. Maybe experiment with the black line between the chin and beard?
Dyonus 26th Jul 2014, 10:54 AM edit delete reply
Dyonus
You mean make the line thicker?
Casanova 28th Jul 2014, 6:51 PM edit delete reply
More like thinner or greener, but I'm not sure if that will be any better.