9th Jun 2014, 1:36 PM in New Mansion

1227. New Mansion 03: Special Guest

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1227. New Mansion 03: Special Guest
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Dyonus 9th Jun 2014, 1:36 PM edit delete
Dyonus
Is it just me or does that secret service dragon look like Joe Camel?

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Andore Mordre 10th Jun 2014, 1:09 AM edit delete reply
Andore Mordre
Oh, hey, quadragons. Been a while.
Unnecessary 11th Jun 2014, 5:37 AM edit delete reply
There is an unnecessary I in the second panel. Beginning of Rachel's second word balloon.
Dyonus 14th Jun 2014, 7:23 PM edit delete reply
Dyonus
Thanks. I'll get that fixed. It's probably left over from when I rewrote her dialogue. (I do rewrites from time to time and sometimes I don't get rid of all of the previous version, especially during partial rewrites.)